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This one is one of the newer pieces I did with oils (on wood board). It's a big piece. I think like 40 inches tall. The area at the bottom left has glare on it so i am not going to make a print of this version, but otherwise it's pretty well captured.

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:iconalchemism:
The structure of this allows me to concentrate on your idea: it's visually laid out well, acting as steps up or down the piece, as well as directing me to other areas of the painting. Movement is continuous, and I think that has a lot to do with how skilled you are with colour.

Some areas I find seem as though you've had two agendas while painting this: the central structure commands attention, and many of the areas act as a secondary thought. The dashes and hashes (which have become a Jasinskism) in this work, seem to fill in space rather than perform as part of the whole. However, some of the same work is seen in the robot's head and body, yet it works successfully - they're not just dropped in as glue from one image (the smooth paint-work of the woman's face) to similar work in the robot. Likewise on the right.

Your work is, by its very nature and suggestion, pop - and I feel as though there are elements that rub me the wrong way: the far too overused stormtrooper especially. Some parts become lost: the pink-headed figure to the left of the orange-haired boy, and a lot of the paintwork below the final step of waterfall. That could also be the documentation, but it's something I notice in the work.

As far as your title and concept: I'm pretty sure I understand what exactly you're on about, yet without that title, I may have a little trouble discerning what each figure represents. Perhaps nothing. I just feel there could be clarity.

And Aaron, I have always wanted to see you work large. 40" tall, yes, that's larger than how you usually work. But I've waited (perhaps perpetually) for something that kicks me in the face with it's sheer size and complexity. 76" x 64" maybe. 50" x 50" even.

Anyway, as always great painting - you're so in tune with colour and light it's fantastic, and your ability to compose is inspiring, likely not just to me.
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:iconthimblebostitch:
It always makes me so happy when you post! This is wonderful. I love the pink hippo, that's just awesome. I want one. :heart:

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:iconbigboybryan:
how long does it take you to finish a painting?

and nice work !

your paintings are really amazing! :D
:iconjasinski:
something like this.. probably 4-7 days.

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:iconbigboybryan:
o really !? O:

i guess greatness takes time XD
:iconbluemoon214:
Another awesome work! wow 4-7 days! that's a long time!
I can see you put a lot effort to your work!
:iconforkfighter:
Wow. Definitely one of your best pieces up to now. I really like the contemplative atmosphere. Also really good work on the composition and the depth of the picture. Really neat :-)

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:iconvinnie14:
Your work is so beautiful it inspire me to oil paint again
Your are one of my favorite painters on DA

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:iconalapip:
Aaron,

amazing how time is so subject
to perspective. i would say,
for something this intricate
and detailed, seven days is
blazing fast.

(three times, on personal land-
scaping projects, i've spent two
years.)

i love this piece of your work!

pip

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:iconlainwiththedevil:
WOW! stunning work! I love the detail and the colors. :D

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:iconluismario:
Pure awesomeness, man!

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Mar 31, 2009, 1:26:32 PM

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