Here is the final version for "Home". Thank you everyone who contributed their feedback! I really took it to heart. Some great ideas. This is for a solo show I will be doing at Screaming Sky gallery in Portland Oregon this coming October/November.
I love this version. The bird is just right because it is closer to the viewer and bigger for that reason. The bird looks masculine and that is good. It will fit. Is your show this year, 2013? I hope to see it. Beautiful. Marta. please write email@example.com
Nice I like it how you changed their hair and added the fence I just wish the bird was a bit smaller , It looks like a big crow and it feels like it wont fit in the home, besides that this is really beautiful, both the concept and the painting style